| from Thirty Birds |
Friday, August 21, 2015
Thursday, August 20, 2015
Zenaida, born of Zeus
Killdeers call with perpetual fear,
Nothing but fear, fear, fear, look here, look here!
Owls stand guard with the moods of moonlight,
Calling who, who, who casts their shadows at night?
Each bird sings with a different style,
And somehow the mourning dove lost its smile.
Nobody knows their trouble and strain:
Woe is woe, woe, woe. Pain is pain, pain, pain.
Nuthatches ha-ha-ha nervous as clowns
Dancing on branches and making their rounds;
Gulls have a child-like exuberant noise,
A playground of high-pitched girls and boys;
A distant hawk telegraphs its fairest warning,
And then there’s the dove, quietly mourning.
I cannot explain the mourning dove’s pain.
Can’t explain pain, pain. Can’t explain pain, pain.
Crows are all arrogance, breaking the law,
Disturbing the peace with their caw, caw, caw;
Jays cop an attitude, ringing their name
From the tops of trees, all jay and no shame;
Cardinals share their clear cheer cheer
But doves keep it personal, muted, austere
With hints of a story that nobody knows:
No one feels their pain. No one knows their woes.
Sparrows are whistling Dixie, with calls
Of teakettles, peabodies, bounced rubber balls;
Thrushes are pipers that play heaven for us,
Ethereally luring us into the forest;
Most birds are easy to characterize,
But who is to say why the mourning dove cries?
I cannot explain the mourning dove’s pain.
Can’t explain pain, pain. Can’t explain pain, pain.
from Thirty Birds
from Thirty Birds
Wednesday, August 19, 2015
Moleskin 4.5
Our second suburban home had been four blocks away from the drainage ditch, and in the summer of twelve we moved even further away, to a place that seemed to be removed from rivers altogether. As before, I don’t remember much about the U-Hauling, maybe because it was mostly Dodge Darting, but oddly I can’t recall anything about the wedding either. We were just suddenly transplanted one suburb south, into a single family home with not much more yard than the townhouse had and with a new person in Dad’s place, someone who also wanted to be called “Dad.” My younger brothers obliged, but I insisted in calling him “Don.” Don was an engineer, and the house was his; he had shared the space with his parents, who were also suddenly transplanted that summer: out with the old, in with the new. Except that Don was old, too, forty four years old, never before married, never had kids. Didn’t have a clue. He was a loving uncle to his sister’s daughter, but that was hardly the same.
Tuesday, August 18, 2015
Somewhere
The sun is somewhere in a cloudy sky
And I can’t tell the hour, nor east from west, But though the dusk my spirit would deny
My body’s telling me it’s time to rest,
And what has carried me these miles beyond
My starting point, that dawn so far away
The fundamental memories are gone,
Would somewhere in the middle of the day
Turn to its history of winding roads
And heaving hills and shifting winds and rain. But if what breathes can bear the pains and loads What lives will take each step as gift and gain And claim the highways leveled and unbending, And dream the better day of its unending.
Somewhere, past the fog, up in the trees,
A bluebird sings its timeless song to me And to the world of possibilities Of heaven unsophisticatedly Descending on a sunless day, a song So sweet and sad and simple that the air At once intoxicates and makes me strong, Uplifts me and abandons me. Somewhere, I must believe, my destiny awaits, And at the final turn, this history Will end and leave its luggage at the gates: This road, this day, this bird that sings to me, And all these weary words will cease to be And I will fly into eternity.
from Thirty Birds
And I can’t tell the hour, nor east from west, But though the dusk my spirit would deny
My body’s telling me it’s time to rest,
And what has carried me these miles beyond
My starting point, that dawn so far away
The fundamental memories are gone,
Would somewhere in the middle of the day
Turn to its history of winding roads
And heaving hills and shifting winds and rain. But if what breathes can bear the pains and loads What lives will take each step as gift and gain And claim the highways leveled and unbending, And dream the better day of its unending.
Somewhere, past the fog, up in the trees,
A bluebird sings its timeless song to me And to the world of possibilities Of heaven unsophisticatedly Descending on a sunless day, a song So sweet and sad and simple that the air At once intoxicates and makes me strong, Uplifts me and abandons me. Somewhere, I must believe, my destiny awaits, And at the final turn, this history Will end and leave its luggage at the gates: This road, this day, this bird that sings to me, And all these weary words will cease to be And I will fly into eternity.
from Thirty Birds
Monday, August 17, 2015
Following the Path (A Restatement from David Pendlebury’s Garden)
The non-existent have come to serve
at the door of true existence,
nor is it just today that this is so
but since time began
dervishes have come
bereft of wealth and power,
swarming like ants at the door of love.
...No one knows how far it is
from nothingness to God,
but the self will wander right and left
day and night
for years and years
turning around itself like an ox in the mill;
break free from yourself,
free yourself from yourself
and in little time the wandering will cease
Sunday, August 16, 2015
Positure
Once, looking back, my tracks left in the snow
Seemed pigeon-toed and rambling hereandthere
And barely showing where I meant to go
And never really getting anywhere,
So I resolved to walk a straighter line
With better posture and a clearer goal,
And in my mind the tracks I left behind
Were perfect pictures of a pristine soul,
Until, unsatisfied, I turned around
To see my legacy and take account,
Which caused my steps to weave from
edge to edge;
My back re-bent, and I began to sway;
And on my cue, a pigeon on a ledge
Stretched out its sturdy wings
and flew away.
from Thirty Birds
Seemed pigeon-toed and rambling hereandthere
And barely showing where I meant to go
And never really getting anywhere,
So I resolved to walk a straighter line
With better posture and a clearer goal,
And in my mind the tracks I left behind
Were perfect pictures of a pristine soul,
Until, unsatisfied, I turned around
To see my legacy and take account,
Which caused my steps to weave from
edge to edge;
My back re-bent, and I began to sway;
And on my cue, a pigeon on a ledge
Stretched out its sturdy wings
and flew away.
from Thirty Birds
Saturday, August 15, 2015
Epigraphs and Epitaphs
T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land (TWL), lines 296-306:
“My feet are at Moorgate and my heart
Under my feet. ...
Moorgate is an Underground stop in London’s financial district.
...After the event
He wept.
“He wept” repeats the convalescent’s lament (see TWL 182: “By the waters of
Leman I sat down and wept...”) but also recalls Jesus weeping after the event of
Lazarus’s death (John 11:35). See Section 1, “Burial of the Dead,” alluding to
The Order for the Burial of the Dead in The Church of England, Book of
Common Prayer (1662), which begins with a passage at the heart of the Lazarus
event, John 11:26 (KJV, 1611):
...whosoever liveth and believeth in me, shall never die.
See also the poem’s epigraph, from Petronius Arbiter, Satyricon, 48 (ca.
AD 50, tr. Michael Heseltine 1913):
TRIMALCHIO
Yes, and I myself with my own eyes saw the Sibyl hanging in a cage; and when
the boys cried at her: “Sibyl, Sibyl, what do you want?” “I would that I were dead,”
she used to answer.’
Eliot had considered an alternative epigraph in Kurtz’s dying words, from
Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness 3 (1902):
The horror! The horror!
The spectrum of DYING WORDS in The Waste Land ranges from the
deathless speech of the Sybil wanting to die to literal dying words of Hamlet
and Ophelia (TWL 128 and 172) to the speechless death of the drowned
sailor/hyacinth girl (see TWL 38-40 and 47-48). Rhetorical questions
hang in the air (TWL 111-134), souls sigh in limbo (TWL 60-68), a riverbank
weeper weeps (TWL 182) and a lovely woman sees death as her only escape
(TWL 253, alluding to Oliver Goldsmith, The Vicar of Wakefield 24 (1766)).
From Goldsmith:
When lovely woman stoops to folly,
And finds too late that men betray,
What charm can soothe her melancholy,
What art can wash her guilt away?
The only art her guilt to cover,
To hide her shame from every eye,
To give repentance to her lover
And wring his bosom, is—to die.
But there is hope.
...He promised ‘a new start.’
See again John 11:26 from the account of Lazarus, and see also Marlow’s
comment on Kurtz’s last words in Heart of Darkness 3:
Better his cry—much better. It was an affirmation, a moral victory paid for by
innumerable defeats ...But it was a victory!
Compare Herman Hesse, A Glimpse of Chaos: The Brothers Karamazov, or
The Downfall of Europe (1920; tr. Sydney Schiff, 1922):
Those who cling definitely to the past, those who venerate time-honoured cultural
forms, the Knights of a treasured morality, must seek to delay this Downfall and
will mourn it inconsolably when it passes. For them the Downfall is the End; for the
others, it is the Beginning.
Eliot met Hesse in Switzerland in 1922 and published this translation of Hesse’s
essay in the first issue of his magazine The Criterion (October 1922), the same
issue that offered his debut of The Waste Land.
See also Eliot’s later poems, East Coker (1940):
In my beginning is my end...
...Trying to learn to use words, and every attempt
Is a wholly new start, and a different kind of failure...
...In my end is my beginning.
and Little Gidding (1942):
Every phrase and every sentence is an end and a beginning,
Every poem an epitaph.
For more on epitaphs, see TWL 404-408 (“The awful daring of a moment's
surrender / Which an age of prudence can never retract / By this, and this only, we
have existed / Which is not to be found in our obituaries / Or in memories draped by
the beneficent spider”), which relates to John Webster, The White Devil (1612)
5.6.181-189:
FLAMINEO
...they'll remarry
Ere the worm pierce your winding-sheet, ere the spider
Make a thin curtain for your epitaphs.
Eliot would take the East Coker bookends,“In my beginning is my end... In my
end is my beginning,” as his own epitaph.
I made no comment. What should I resent?”
'On Margate Sands.
I can connect
Nothing with nothing.
Margate is the southern England coastal town along a seaside cliff.
Eliot began a course of RECUPERATION at Margate in the fall of 1921
after suffering from mental exhaustion. He followed this with more formal
treatment in Switzerland (see TWL 182).
The broken fingernails of dirty hands.
Compare the nails of the corpse-digging dog at TWL 75.
My people humble people who expect
Nothing.'
la la
Images of BROKENNESS, EMPTINESS AND NOTHINGNESS pervade
this poem. See note, TWL 115 and TWL 22, 40, 119-126, 173, 177, 385,
389, 409, 410, 417 and 427 and here at TWL 300-305. Compare these
lines with the humble thoughts of Kurtz’s “last disciple” in Conrad, Heart of
Darkness 3:
I am a simple man. I have no great thoughts. I want nothing from anybody.
Friday, August 14, 2015
Domesticus
A Passing Tribute To Robert Frost:
The bird would cease and be as other birds But that he knows in singing not to sing. The question that he frames in all but words Is what to make of a diminished thing. — Robert Frost
I’ve traveled miles and miles to find a bird That’s different than the usual sorts I see To supplement the life list that I keep (To know the lovely dark and deep) And live beyond the world surrounding me. The bird I seek may have a special song Or brilliant feathers or a way about it That separates it from the daily throng (Persisted in the woods so long) And justifies the miles that I’ve devoted. Perhaps the place I go they call a bird Exotic that’s so everyday to me I hardly hear (lost in the sweep Of easy wind) its ordinary cheep; Its ordinary looks I barely see. And in this place, they keep lists of their own And travel miles and miles just to find Within the dreary world from which I came (Having perhaps the better claim) The gardenful of birds I’ve left behind.
from Thirty Birds
The bird would cease and be as other birds But that he knows in singing not to sing. The question that he frames in all but words Is what to make of a diminished thing. — Robert Frost
I’ve traveled miles and miles to find a bird That’s different than the usual sorts I see To supplement the life list that I keep (To know the lovely dark and deep) And live beyond the world surrounding me. The bird I seek may have a special song Or brilliant feathers or a way about it That separates it from the daily throng (Persisted in the woods so long) And justifies the miles that I’ve devoted. Perhaps the place I go they call a bird Exotic that’s so everyday to me I hardly hear (lost in the sweep Of easy wind) its ordinary cheep; Its ordinary looks I barely see. And in this place, they keep lists of their own And travel miles and miles just to find Within the dreary world from which I came (Having perhaps the better claim) The gardenful of birds I’ve left behind.
from Thirty Birds
Thursday, August 13, 2015
The Closet Monster
or Never Fear, by Dog
Most of the time, there is absolutely nothing to worry about. The thing is usually not much more than an inanimate object. Right now, for instance, it seems to be sleeping in a corner of the hall closet, minding its own business, not making a sound. Of course, it is evening now, and the thing has never been known to stir at night, but even in the daytime, as long as the closet door is closed and it keeps to the shadows, it maintains a harmless peace that even a dutiful watchdog might begin to accept.
But don’t be alarmed, my two-legged friends, for you have not only a dutiful dog but a wise one, who knows a deceptive calm when he sees one. I don’t mean to scare you, but there is a beast in our house, a savage monster behind that closet door, with a spine-chilling howl and armor-plated skin and hidden teeth. But rest assured, good people, you shall not be bothered. I am your guard dog, and I am keen to the monster’s ways. If that closet door cracks open even the slightest bit, I’ll perk up my eyes and ears. If the monster wakes, I promise to let you know. And if it dares to emerge from its shadows, never fear, people, I will be on my feet even before the demon lets out its first hair-raising screech. I will not allow it to take over the house. I will scare it back into the closet, so that all of you may stay safe and sound this evening. That is my job, after all, and I intend, as always, to do it right.
Perhaps some of you aren’t even aware of the monster’s existence. I’m not surprised. The animal rarely comes out when everyone is home, largely due, I’m sure, to my persistent guarding. Right now, for instance, I do not allow it to intrude on you while you’re all eating your dinner, or later when you look at your television, or after that when you’ve fallen asleep. I am doubly alert with the whole family around, and in times like these the monster stays put, probably because it knows better.
Likewise, the beast seems to have enough sense to keep to the shadows when no one is around —no one, that is, but me. It knows, I believe, that without the restraint that looking out for your safety puts on me, I would tear out its very heart. I swear, by dog, I would have no tolerance. In fact, more than once on those solitary days, I’ve thought of busting the door down and attacking the monster in cold blood, while it sleeps. Even now that is an appealing thought.
But don’t be concerned, people, I am hardly a beast myself. I will control my temper, for your sake, even if just one of you is in the house.
It is precisely those times, however, that the creature always seems to wait for. It’s as if it knows that I’m not the brutal savage then that I would be in an empty house, nor the alert guard, as I’m trying to be right now, with the house full. I guess it thinks that with just one or two people home, I’m not as much on my toes. And so it has been, I confess. In the winter afternoons, for instance, like the one we had today, the sun looks so inviting as it shines on the living room carpet. And from time to time, I’m sorry to say, I lapse from my basic duties, in favor of that carpet, giving the enemy more opportunity than it deserves.
Usually only one of you is around. Maybe you’re in the kitchen, playing with dishes, or walking around the house rubbing windows. I glance at the hall closet and see it closed. I peek in the kitchen and see you safe, and —just for a while, mind you —I stretch out and catch my breath, and I relax my guard. Oh, but forgive me, gentle people, for being less than diligent. Forgive me for thinking too much of myself. For it is in just this setting, me stretched out on the floor and you roaming unprotected through the house, that the creature suddenly roars. I jump up and run for the closet, but it is too late. You are no longer in the kitchen, playing with dishes, but in the hallway, gripping tightly at the monster’s neck. Oh, what a sorry dog I am! If only I had been lying against that door to keep, or if only I had not been lying down at all, then you would never have been involved.
But the sly beast had waited for this opportunity. And what can I do now? As the battle gets under way, you have its neck, and I can only be ready on the side in case you lose your grip. Oh, how I wish that it could be me who has the throat-hold. By dog, I would rip that neck in two.
As it is, though, I can’t do much more than cheer you on. I try to bark louder than the beast, but the beast is deafening, and has incredible endurance. I try to keep the beast at bay, but it is a very clever creature and cunningly expands the battlefield, pulling you slowly from one room to the next. I try to bite the beast, but it is a thick-skinned animal, impervious to my attacks. Only its neck appears to be vulnerable, and that is in your clutches. As you whip it here and there, I can only encourage you to tighten your hold. Of course I suggest, now and then, that maybe you ought to turn its pitiful neck over to me.
But I can see that you’re afraid. You start speaking to me, perhaps asking me how and when you should let go of its neck. But because of the monster’s terrible screaming, I can’t make out exactly what you’re saying, and you don’t seem to hear my reply.
The battle goes on, throughout the entire house. We move into the living room, and the animal spends an extra amount of time right over the area of carpet where I had been sprawled out on moments before. This really steams me, and I start barking even louder. You seem to apply more pressure on your strangle-hold, and yet the monster continues to roar. It could be, I consider, that the neck is thicker than I thought. But I keep barking back at the beast, hoping always that I might at least frighten it back into its shadows.
We wrestle through every room of the house, and then suddenly, even as my barks are starting to crack, the roaring stops. The animal’s endurance has proven to be less than mine, and I keep on barking, triumphantly, as you drag the silent body back to the closet and firmly close the door.
It is evening, and you are all in the house again. I always notice on nights like this that one of you —the recent warrior, I mean —never wants to say anything about the incident. I understand. You’re still a little shaky, or maybe you don’t want to concern the others. Maybe you know as well as I do that the beast isn’t dead yet. Well, rest assured. The next time I get a chance, I swear, I’m going to bust in and kill that thing for good. In the mean time, never fear, eat your dinner in peace, and enjoy complete safety. Your guard dog is on patrol. My ears are tuned to the closet door, and I will sense the slightest movement in the hallway. I will protect you from the evil monster of the shadows, and you fine people may continue your peaceful meal without any interruption.
But say, I sure would appreciate it if you would put a plate of food aside for me.
English 201, 3/5/90, Prof. Lavin
English 201, 3/5/90, Prof. Lavin
Wednesday, August 12, 2015
Moleskin 4.4
Put yourself in my shoes, just for a moment: it is the summer of ‘75, or for the sake of otherness, the summer of twelve. Your father and mother are working hard to raise you, and working together, but something isn’t right. They are living in separate places, looking in different directions; they are often consumed by their own challenges, facing their own futures apart from yours. So it is, with varying degrees of consumption and challenge, for every parent, but this does not occur to you in your youth, and it troubles you even more as parent one starts to talk about moving away to relaunch a career, and as parent two seems to be lonely, in need of a partner. And all of a sudden parent two finds that new partner to finally replace parent one, and in the same sudden, and the order doesn’t matter here, parent one moves two states away, happily accepting a call to a new beginning. And the world seems happy for both of them, but you’re left punching your Christmas present, wondering why.
Tuesday, August 11, 2015
Walter
Sir Walter Dog was not the knight
we wanted him to be, and yet
he struck a pose on our front steps,
perusing distant fields.
Nor was he quite the Scottish writer
we would have him answer to,
although I’d bet he had his own
adventures to reveal.
He was a dog, we’ll give him that,
but nothing of the pedigree
some said he was —more terrier,
less cocka, mostly poo.
But you’re one for the ages, Walter,
living on in quiet memories
for more than thirty years, and we’re
still calling out to you.
from Stillwater Symposia
we wanted him to be, and yet
he struck a pose on our front steps,
perusing distant fields.
Nor was he quite the Scottish writer
we would have him answer to,
although I’d bet he had his own
adventures to reveal.
He was a dog, we’ll give him that,
but nothing of the pedigree
some said he was —more terrier,
less cocka, mostly poo.
But you’re one for the ages, Walter,
living on in quiet memories
for more than thirty years, and we’re
still calling out to you.
from Stillwater Symposia
Monday, August 10, 2015
Leo
King Leopold of Vold once ruled
that portion of our Glyndon jungle
where the grass was not quite wild
and the river didn’t reach.
We kept a chain around his golden
neck for his own good, we said,
but when he grumbled now and then
we’d let him off the leash.
I want what Leo wanted then,
to have the lion’s share of life,
to run along the jungle’s edge,
to chase what I desire.
But in a dog’s life, just a taste
of freedom turns into an urge
to hit the roads and try to bite
the tires off of cars.
from Stillwater Symposia
that portion of our Glyndon jungle
where the grass was not quite wild
and the river didn’t reach.
We kept a chain around his golden
neck for his own good, we said,
but when he grumbled now and then
we’d let him off the leash.
I want what Leo wanted then,
to have the lion’s share of life,
to run along the jungle’s edge,
to chase what I desire.
But in a dog’s life, just a taste
of freedom turns into an urge
to hit the roads and try to bite
the tires off of cars.
from Stillwater Symposia
Sunday, August 9, 2015
Walking Song, Revisited (to the tune of Arcade Fire's Modern Man)
I am the man, and this is my dog.
What would I hear if this dog could talk?
What would I want to say if I were the dog?
What would I think? What would I know?
Where would I run to? How far would I go?
And would I run away if I were the dog?
God is the man and I am the dog.
I’m not the man I once thought I was.
He seems so far away, and I don't know what to say,
But I'll stretch this leash from here to heaven,
And I'll sometimes think I know the way
And I'll take the paths that I’ve been given
And I'm learning, I'm learning what to say.
I am the man. This is my dog.
I try to listen when we go walk.
We go walking every day,
And we keep walking, me and my dog.
You may think that you know,
but you'll never understand
the walk of man and dog.
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
Prayer is a leash, and this is my prayer,
Drawing me close to the man up there.
He's not so far away,
And I'm working on what to say.
God is the man, but I am the one
Who walks with him when the day is done,
And with each breaking dawn
I am the dog,
And I’ll stretch this leash from here to heaven,
And I'll sometimes think I know the way,
But I’ll take the paths that I’ve been given
And I'm learning, I'm learning how to pray.
...but you'll never understand
the walk of man and dog.
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
You may think that you know,
but you'll never understand...
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
What would I hear if this dog could talk?
What would I want to say if I were the dog?
What would I think? What would I know?
Where would I run to? How far would I go?
And would I run away if I were the dog?
God is the man and I am the dog.
I’m not the man I once thought I was.
He seems so far away, and I don't know what to say,
But I'll stretch this leash from here to heaven,
And I'll sometimes think I know the way
And I'll take the paths that I’ve been given
And I'm learning, I'm learning what to say.
I am the man. This is my dog.
I try to listen when we go walk.
We go walking every day,
And we keep walking, me and my dog.
You may think that you know,
but you'll never understand
the walk of man and dog.
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
Prayer is a leash, and this is my prayer,
Drawing me close to the man up there.
He's not so far away,
And I'm working on what to say.
God is the man, but I am the one
Who walks with him when the day is done,
And with each breaking dawn
I am the dog,
And I’ll stretch this leash from here to heaven,
And I'll sometimes think I know the way,
But I’ll take the paths that I’ve been given
And I'm learning, I'm learning how to pray.
...but you'll never understand
the walk of man and dog.
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
but you'll never understand...
Whether dog, whether man,
you're just doing what you can
on the walk of dog and man.
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
The dog and man...
Saturday, August 8, 2015
Songs Beyond The Isle Of Dogs
T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land (TWL), lines 266-295
The river sweats
Eliot’s note: “The Song of the (three) Thames-daughters begins here. From line
292 to 306 inclusive they speak in turn. V. Götterdammerung, III. I: the
Rhine-daughters.”
THE RIVER THAMES is central to this section of the poem, but see also TWL
173-184. For London Bridge, see TWL 62 and 427. For other river allusions, see
TWL 4 (the Lethe), 25 (Isaiah’s river), 41 (the Congo), 77 (the Cydnus), 172
(Ophelia’s river), 266 (the Rhine), 293 (the Arno) and 396 (the Ganges).
Eliot's Thames-daughters follow the nymphs of Edmund Spenser, Prothalamion
(1596) (and see also TWL 176, 183 and 184):
Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song...
There, in a meadow, by the river's side,
A flock of nymphs I chanced to espy,
All lovely daughters of the flood thereby....
The Thames-daughters’ song, however, is more directly derived from that of the
Rhinemaidens in Richard Wagner, Götterdammerung (The Twilight of the
Gods, 1876, tr. Frederick Jameson, ca. 1916). The chorus lines "Weialala leia,
Wallala leialala" (TWL 277-278) and the more terse “la la”(TWL 306) are Wagner’s
own, and Eliot also uses gold forging (lines 282-284) and assimilates Wagner’s
clipped pace and spritely tone (TWL 266-289) to contrast the song’s grimmer
content. In the opera, the nymphs take turns singing one line at a time, with some
of the same curse and restoration motifs of the Grail legend. See Twilight
3.1.81-92:
From the Rhine's pure gold
was the ring once wrought.
He who craftily shaped it
and lost it in shame
laid a curse thereon
for time to come to doometh
its lord surely to death
...if thou the ring wilt not yield
to rest for aye in the waters
this stream alone stayeth the curse!
Oil and tar
The barges drift
With the turning tide
Red sails
Wide
To leeward, swing on the heavy spar.
See Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness, 1 (1902)
The sea-reach of the Thames stretched before us like the beginning of an
interminable waterway. In the offing the sea and the sky were welded together
without a joint, and in the luminous space the tanned sails of the barges drifting
up with the tide seemed to stand still in red clusters of canvas sharply peaked,
with gleams of varnished sprits.
The barges wash
Drifting logs
Down Greenwich reach
Past the Isle of Dogs.
Greenwich Reach is a straight section of the Thames south and east of the Isle of
Dogs, at London’s East End just north of Greenwich. The Isle of Dogs, once an
island, is now a peninsula at one of the larger meanders in the Thames River. The
royal dogs of King Henry VIII, and later Queen Elizabeth I, were said to be kenneled
here, although there is no record of the name being used prior to 1588, when it first
appeared on a map. It is, in any case, just across the river from the erstwhile
grounds of the Palace of Placentia, the royal residence where Elizabeth was born
in 1533 and where her Privy Council later met. In 1597, Ben Jonson and Thomas
Nashe wrote a satirical play called The Isle of Dogs, which allegedly offended the
queen and crossed lines of propriety to the point that Jonson and two of his fellow
actors were arrested and all copies of the play were destroyed. The matter was
referred to the Privy Council, which found the actors guilty of “leude and mutynous
behavior” and recommended a three month prison term and a ban on all public
plays for the rest of the summer. Queen Elizabeth was generally a supportive
patron of London’s theater scene, but she carried out the Council’s
recommendations, effectively imposing a ban usually reserved for the lenten
season.
The image of DOGS occurs only one other time in The Waste Land, when the poet
bids his friend to keep the dog from digging up a corpse (TWL 74), but there are
other seemingly related references within the poem’s principal allusions: From
William Shakespeare, The Tempest, 1.2.376-402 (1611) (see TWL 26, 48,
119-123, 125, 182, 192, 257 and 393) Ariel’s song refers to barking watchdogs;
from Ovid, Metamorphoses 3:206-312 (AD 8) (see TWL 77-81 and TWL
197-198) Diana turns Actaeon into a stag to be hunted by his own dogs; from
Jesus ben Sira, Alphabeta (ca.AD 700-900; tr. M. Steinschneider, 1858) (see
TWL 139-161) Lilith is sent to the desert where the wild dogs dwell; and from
Sophocles, Antigone 5: 79-83 (441 BC, tr. Francis Storr, 1912) (see TWL
243-246) Tiresias speaks of
mangled warriors who have found a grave
I' the maw of wolf or hound
Weialala leia
Wallala leialala
Elizabeth and Leicester
Eliot's note: "V. Froude, Elizabeth, vol. I, ch. iv, letter of De Quadra to Philip of
Spain..." See James Anthony Froude, The Reign of Elizabeth (1911):
In the afternoon we were in a barge, watching the games on the river. (The
queen) was alone with Lord Robert and myself on the poop, when they began to
talk nonsense, and went so far that Lord Robert at last said, as I was on the spot
there was no reason why they should not be married if the queen pleased.
In his 1561 letter to King Philip, Spanish Ambassador Alvaro de la Quadra
supported talk that Elizabeth I, known as the Virgin Queen, and Lord Robert
Dudley, later the Earl of Leicester, were lovers who would rendezvous at the
Queen’s home in Greenwich, past the Isle of Dogs. A year earlier, Lord Robert’s
first wife, Amy Robsart, had died from a fall down a flight of stairs. The coroner
officially ruled her death an accident, but rumors persisted that he had arranged for
her death in order to be free to marry the Queen. In 1564, four years after the
accident the Queen appointed him Earl of Leicester, but she never did marry Lord
Robert or anyone else, and Lord Robert did not remarry for eighteen years.
Beating oars
The BEATING OARS motif is presented twice in the poem, here and at TWL 420,
but there are also several indirect references, first through the adapted description
of Cleopatra’s chambers (see TWL 77) and then in the allusion to Philomela’s
abduction (see TWL 99).
The stern was formed
A gilded shell
Red and gold
Red and gold are the colors of the Spanish flag. In 1588, the Earl of Leicester
ostensibly defended the Thames to keep the Spanish Armada from advancing
towards London.
The brisk swell
Rippled both shores
Southwest wind
Carried down stream
The peal of bells
White towers
Weialala leia
Wallala leialala
The peal of bells and white towers suggest the festive trappings of a wedding,
forever out of reach for Elizabeth and Leicester; bells also characterize the Tower
of London and St Paul’s Cathedral, once white before taking on the dinge of time,
pollution and war. See also lines 383-384: “...towers tolling reminiscent bells.” See
also Walt Whitman, Memories of President Lincoln 6 (1892):
With the tolling tolling bells’ perpetual clang.
“Trams and dusty trees.
Highbury bore me. Richmond and Kew
Undid me. By Richmond I raised my knees
Supine on the floor of a narrow canoe.”
This is the first of the three Thames-daughters' songs. The three singers relate
losses of virginity, each one having a different perspective.
Eliot's note: "Cf. Purgatorio, V. 133: 'Ricorditi di me, che son la Pia; / Siena mi fe',
disfecemi Maremma.'" This refers to Dante Alighieri, Purgatorio 5:118-136
(1321, tr. Henry Wordsworth Longfellow, 1867):
...Down fell the rain, and to the gullies came
Whate'er of it earth tolerated not;
And as it mingled with the mighty torrents,
Towards the royal river with such speed
It headlong rushed, that nothing held it back.
My frozen body near unto its outlet
The robust Archian found, and into Arno
Thrust it, and loosened from my breast the cross
I made of me, when agony o'ercame me;
It rolled me on the banks and on the bottom,
Then with its booty covered and begirt me.
‘Ah, when thou hast returned unto the world,
And rested thee from thy long journeying,’
After the second followed the third spirit,
‘Do Thou remember me who am the Pia;
Siena made me, unmade me Maremma
He knoweth it, who had encircled first,
Espousing me, my finger with his gem.
The speaker is Pia de Tolemei, wife of a thirteenth century Tuscan captain who had
her killed to facilitate his marriage to another woman (compare similar allegations
against Lord Robert above). Pia was born to a noble family in Siena; her husband
was the lord of Castel di Pietra in Maremma.
See also William Shakespeare, Antony and Cleopatra 2.2.208 (1623):
...and what they undid did.
In the present passage, Highbury is a working class London suburb; Kew and
Richmond are communities along the River Thames in southwest London, with the
Royal Botanic Gardens, commonly called Kew Gardens, situated between them.
Eliot’s use of this allusion and its tie to London neighborhoods may have been
initially inspired by Ezra Pound, Ode to Hugh Selwyn Mauberley (1920), an
autobiographical London satire with eighteen separate poems, the seventh called
“Siena mi fè, disfecemi Maremma.”
from T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land, with annotations (and other explanations)
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