Saturday, March 28, 2015
Characters
T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land
(TWL), Section 1
The Burial Of The Dead
See The Order for the Burial of the Dead in The Church of England,
The Book of Common Prayer (1662). The order of service begins with
a passage from John 11:26 (King James Version, 1611), and
specifically from the story of Lazarus being raised from the dead:
...whosoever liveth and believeth in me, shall never die.
The poem, meanwhile, proceeds with a series of character introductions,
beginning with Countess Marie and followed by the Son of Man, the
Hyacinth Prince, the Clairvoyante and, obtusely, the Reader’s Brother.
The characters generally seem eager to live, to speak and be heard, but
death lingers around them.
This is sometimes called the “earth” section, the first of the poem’s five
sections using the CLASSICAL ELEMENTS of earth, air, fire, water and
wind as themes. Eliot would later repeat this structure with the first four
elements and the quintessential wind in Four Quartets (1943).
Designation of the classical elements can be found in early Babylonian,
Indian, Greek and Chinese philosophies. See Anon., Enuma Elis (ca.
1800 BC, tr. as The Seven Tablets of Creation by E. A. Wallis Budge,
1921), a Babylonian cuneiform text which describes creation through
personifications of water, earth, sky and fire. See also Upanishads,
Shvetashvatara Upanishad 2:12 (ca 400-200 BC, tr. Robert Ernest
Hume, 1921):
When the fivefold quality of Yoga has been produced,
Arising from earth, water, fire, air and space,
No sickness, no old age, no death has he
Who has obtained a body made out of the fire of Yoga.
See also Plato, Timaeus 48b, (ca. 360 BC, tr. W.R.M. Lamb, 1925):
We must gain a view of the real nature of fire and water, air and earth,
as it was before the birth of Heaven.
Finally, see Anon., Mawangdui Silk Texts (ca. 168 BC), presenting the
Chinese philosophy of Wu Xing and the five phases of wood, fire, earth,
metal and water.
from T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land, with annotations (and other explanations)
Friday, March 27, 2015
Elements
Fire, wind, ground and water: we
have thrived on these, would hold and harness these.
Science, passion, faith, philosophy:
we turn to these and would depend on these
to understand small sparks, short gusts, the mist
and dust of east and west, of north and south;
we cling, we clutch and to the death defend
the corners of existence of and in
a universe we cannot comprehend,
nor are these elements we can control,
the warmth, the breath, the earth, the very blood,
of fire and wind, of ground and water: we,
for all we grasp, remain beholden to
the God of time and space and land and sea.
from Turning the Metaphor
have thrived on these, would hold and harness these.
Science, passion, faith, philosophy:
we turn to these and would depend on these
to understand small sparks, short gusts, the mist
and dust of east and west, of north and south;
we cling, we clutch and to the death defend
the corners of existence of and in
a universe we cannot comprehend,
nor are these elements we can control,
the warmth, the breath, the earth, the very blood,
of fire and wind, of ground and water: we,
for all we grasp, remain beholden to
the God of time and space and land and sea.
from Turning the Metaphor
Thursday, March 26, 2015
Eulogies
I
Your words to my lips to their hearts:
What you speak from your soul
I would seek to, strive to understand
That they, your audience, would feel
More than hear what I say,
That I, your agent, would sing
More than simply recite,
That you, my brother, would be in spirit here
To touch their hearts directly
And make some subtle difference
To the beat of their lives
In the slow, sometimes painful dance of time,
That we could render this poem complete:
Your soul to my song to their beat.

II
To sit on the deck, to watch
Your words to my lips to their hearts:
What you speak from your soul
I would seek to, strive to understand
That they, your audience, would feel
More than hear what I say,
That I, your agent, would sing
More than simply recite,
That you, my brother, would be in spirit here
To touch their hearts directly
And make some subtle difference
To the beat of their lives
In the slow, sometimes painful dance of time,
That we could render this poem complete:
Your soul to my song to their beat.
II
She lives in your warm smile
and your easy laugh,
your purposeful hugs;
She lives in the way you keep house
and home and family together,
in the part of you too that would see the world;
She is in your eyes and all they have seen,
in your hands resting gently on tired shoulders,
in your heart of tender steel;
She drives with you through Minnesota,
away from the cities and farms
to where the trees turn birch
and the lakes become personal;
She stands with you at the front door,
welcoming, and again
with your smile your laugh your hugs;
She will be forever the reason
you are cousin, sister, brother,
the ones to call her grandma,
the man who named her Bunny;
She will linger
in your lefse heritage, your Norwegian souls,
in the percolating aromas of morning coffee
in the happy of happy hour;
She will resonate
in your day to day testimony,
your quiet evening prayer,
the hymn you hum.
Once she was the one
who worked the lathe
and weaved rugs
and moved heavy stones to a beachfront dock;
It was not long ago
she paddled a canoe
and cleaned the fish we caught;
not so long ago we drove to Idaho
And she worked crossword puzzles
and knitted sweaters
and baked pies and cookies
She would gently massage the knots out of your neck
without you ever asking
and one day she hugged you
from the back of your chair
from the back of your chair
and said I am so happy you are here.
Now you hike through the woods
and walk a beast of a dog;
you find your lifelong companion
and you keep planting trees
and watching them grow;
And you travel the world
and you never run out of places to go
but you keep coming home
To sit on the deck, to watch
the rising sun, the setting sun
or in the house by the hearth
you watch the fire
And you will hold this as long as you can,
maybe you will glimpse heaven,
or simply appreciate the moment
But you will smile
Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Moleskin 2.4
My first memories, however, seem to immediately include my brother Daniel Martin. He was born where my sentience began: in central North Dakota during the war protest years, son of a homemaker and a seminarian, the second child as long as I’m here to remind him. Neither of us has any awareness of our family’s move to North Dakota, where our dad was assigned an internship in his last year of seminary, nor have we ever paused to consider what was surely, leading up to this, a momentous career change for our father. In our eyes he had always been a preacher, and we were the preacher’s kids. There is a lasting camaraderie in that distinction. There was also a level of community attention, and stigma, from this, which brotherhood would help us endure and appreciate.
Tuesday, March 24, 2015
Restatements
are as cold as hammered steel;
Those unable to grieve
are a vacant wind;
Those who are ungratefulare a vacant wind;
are frightened of themselves;
and those who cannot remember God
have grown older than the hills.
Say the name, O wild rose,
speak the unpronounceable;
Moisten your lips, move your tongue
and praise the indescribable;
Utter the words of every spring
waking the divine;
Open your mouth, O wild rose,
and reveal your hidden gold.
Sanai, ca. 1150AD, tr. Coleman Barks, 1993:
from Walled Gardens
Sanai, ca. 1150AD, tr. Coleman Barks, 1993:
Those unable to grieve,
or to speak of their love,
or to be grateful, those
who can't remember God
as the source of everything,
might be described as a vacant wind,
or a cold anvil, or a group
of frightened old people.
Say the Name. Moisten your tongue
with praise, and be the spring ground,
waking. Let your mouth be given
its gold-yellow stamen like the wild rose's.
Sanai, ca. 1150 AD, tr. Major J. Stephenson, Hadiqa, 1911:
To call on the name of friends, and the unhappy ones of this world, how thinkest thou of it? It is like calling on old women. Oppression, if He ordain it, is all justice; a life without thought of Him is all wind. He laughs who is brought to tears through Him; but that heart is an anvil that thinks not on Him. Thou art secure when thou pronouncest His name, –thou keepest a firm footing on thy path; make thou thy tongue moist, like earth, with remembrance of Him, that He may fill thy mouth, like the rose, with gold. –
Monday, March 23, 2015
Our (collective) Father (familiar)
who art in heaven, hallowed (praise)
be thy name (Yahweh hear us calling).
Thy kingdom come (show us your place),
Thy will be done (the peace that passes)
on earth (to mortals: Jesus born)
as it is in heaven (Jesus risen
everlasting, every morning).
Give us this day our daily bread
(the daily gift of life revealed)
and forgive us our trespasses (faithless fears)
as we forgive (and learn to heal)
those who trespass (the uninvited)
against us (us and them the same).
Lead us (let us ever follow
on thy path and in thy name)
not into temptation (our otherwise
of empty prayers and private hells),
but deliver us (when we do not follow)
from evil (save us from ourselves).
For thine is the kingdom (heaven and earth)
and the power (every strength we know)
and the glory (Jesus lives!), forever
and ever. Amen (let it be so).from March to December
Sunday, March 22, 2015
We Need to Pray
It is a time of mixed emotions at 520 Stewart Ave. We are suddenly shaken with unfamiliar feelings of anxieties and perplexity, stunned by the news that brother Josh has a tumor in his head, and yet we are brought closer together by this. We are sharing our feelings and holding each other up and learning how to pray.
“The family that prays together stays together,” my girlfriend noted a few days ago, and it is true. We need the familiar so very much these days; we need to lean on and to be leaned upon; and when our mixed emotions threaten to weaken us and tear us apart, we need to pray.
We pray as Jesus taught us. It is not our instinctive nature to know how to pray or what to say, but Jesus has made it easy, giving us words that say it all, every word with a power that we cannot find on our own. We pray, right from the start, to one who has been personally introduced to us not only as the Lord’s father but as Our Father, in the spirit of togetherness and family. God is our father and this is our prayer.
We pray with a sense of our place and we praise God, who art in heaven, hallowed be thy name! But we also pray with the encouragement to turn boldly to Our Father with our every need. Jesus taught us to pray upward, without reserve and for everything at once: for strength and healing, providence and peace, hope and joy and humility. Yes, we talk of bread and leading and deliverance, but there is so much more than these words in the prayer we are taught.
We pray for strength. We ask for the strength to merely stand sometimes, and once we are strong we pray for the strength to support others. And all along, weak or strong, we pray for the individual strengths of those around us. I am right now praying for Annie, our youngest sibling, who, being only twelve, has been hit especially hard this week. I am also praying for Mom and Don, who, being our parents, seem to be going through a period of rational denial —but who am I to say? I can only pray. And of course we all pray, every day, for Josh, who has the biggest battle to fight, and yet he seems so strong already, stronger than any one of us; often more fortified than all of us collectively. Still, we pray for his continued strength against all weakness, and we pray knowing that it is by the grace of God that Joshua is strong at all. All strength comes from God. Thine is the power.
We pray for healing. “Deliver us from evil.” There are people in our church family who have started praying fervently for Joshua’s physical healing. Maybe he will be healed by these petitions. For the sake of Joshua and all of us, I hope that this will be true. We love Josh, we don’t want to lose him, but we sometimes fear the worst —Joshua dying, leaving us — and so we pray desperately for God to take away the cause of this fear. Some people even say that it is Satan inside of Joshua’s head, and these people pray quite intensely to exorcize. But I must tell you, I haven’t prayed this prayer very often. I don’t know why God put a tumor in Josh’s brain or why there is fear inside of my own head, but I don’t want to think about Satan. Nonetheless, or maybe consequently, I pray: Deliver us from fear and deliver Joshua from every malignancy. Deliver us from doubt and every shade of the devils within us. Deliver us from evil.
We pray for providence. This is the healing prayer that I am more inclined to pray. I pray for the doctors. I pray for a reduction of any pain Joshua may have. I pray that he will be able to appreciate God’s gift of life to the fullest and I pray that it might be God’s will to let Joshua live rich and long. But I pray, perhaps more fervently again, for the strength of one step at a time, for Joshua and for all of us. I pray for a simple Providence, that God might simply provide us with what we need from day to day. Give us this day our daily bread.
We pray for peace. We try to believe, somehow, that everything is according to God’s plan, that God is just and merciful, that whatever the cause of Joshua’s suffering, God will restore him and reward him in the end. The very last of us, the least comforted, will be the first: God has promised this. I don’t know how to rest in this promise, but I am praying all the same for the truth of it, that Thy will be done and that I will be able to accept the pace of it even before I know the peace of it. We don’t pray to understand. We pray instead for God’s strengthening through the trials and for God’s encouragement by his presence and loudest of all for what we don’t have: that specific peace, the peace that passes all understanding: peace for Joshua, peace for each one of us brought together in prayer, peace on earth as it is in heaven.
We pray for hope. We pray to believe that some day, if we all keep praying, we will reach the place where there are no weaknesses or fears or pain or confusion, where there is only the certainty that God’s will is to take care of us —forever and ever. “The kingdom of God is very near,” always, and so it is: Thine is the kingdom, and so we pray, Thy kingdom come!
We pray for joy, for being able to one day look back and see all that God has given us —even a brain tumor, even if it is a cancerous one —as a blessing. “Blessed be the name of Yahweh!” cried Job in a windstorm. Hallowed be thy name, he cried. And I pray to have that same perception, that beautiful attitude, well before the final day, even as God’s will is done here on earth, as it will be done in heaven. “Blessed be the name of Yahweh!” I want to say, even in the midst of this misfortune, blessed be God for all things! Thine is the glory.
That is how I would pray all the time. But I admit, I cry more often out of fear and uncertainty and anxiety, and so there is one more thing I am learning to pray these days. I pray for forgiveness. I pray to be forgiven for my lack of joy and my weakening faith, even as I learn to forgive others for their own lacking —the deniers, the perplexed ones, the people who refuse to see Satan and the people who see more of Satan and less of God. I pray to remember that underneath our mixed emotions and amidst the storms around us we are all the same; lead us not into the temptation of thinking otherwise. Forgive us all, Father, and help us to have faith the size of a mustard seed to move each mountain before us. Or if it is thy will, Father in heaven, give us the strength to climb the mountain and to get to the other side.
At 520 Stewart we have prayed many prayers in the last several days, but each of our prayers are in the nature of the singular prayer that Jesus taught us to pray, the Lord’s prayer that is our prayer. In Jesus’s name we pray.
Thank you God for teaching us to pray and for hearing our prayers, for giving us your strength, your healing, your providence, your peace, your hope, your joy, and for giving us forgiveness and a place for us beyond our mixed emotions.
Forever and ever, let it be so. Amen.
from March to December
Saturday, March 21, 2015
Opening Allusions
T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land
(TWL), Dedication
For Ezra Pound
il miglior fabbro.
See Dante Alighieri, The Divine Comedy: Purgatorio 26:115-117 (ca. 1321;
tr. Henry Wordsworth Longfellow, 1867):
‘O brother, said he, ‘he who I point out, ...was of the mother tongue
a better smith.’”
This is Dante’s tribute to 12th century Provencal poet Arnaut Daniel. For
Eliot’s further tribute, see TWL 428, where Dante’s Daniel speaks from
purgatory. See also Ezra Pound, The Spirit of Romance (1910),
Pound’s first book on literary criticism in which he translated Dante’s
phrase "il miglio fabbro" as “the better craftsman” and commended
Daniel for his “refusal to use the ‘journalese’ of his day.”
Eliot added this dedication to EZRA POUND in 1925, in Poems, 1909-1925
(Faber), three years after The Waste Land's initial publication. This was also
the first edition in which Eliot included explanatory endnotes. After they met in
1914, Pound was influential in getting Eliot’s The Love Song of J. Alfred
Prufrock published in Poetry Magazine in 1915. See Valerie Eliot, Letters of
T.S. Eliot: 1898-1922 (1988). Pound was even more actively involved as
a reader and editor for The Waste Land. See note at TWL 69, and for a
sample of Pound’s editing see notes 166, 212, 219 and 293; for a fuller effect,
see T. S. Eliot: The Waste Land, a Facsimile & Transcript of the Original
Drafts Including the Annotations of Ezra Pound, edited and with an
Introduction by Valerie Eliot (1971).
See also Pound’s 1921 letter to Eliot just before The Waste Land was
published, in V. Eliot, Letters. In a 48 line poem he called “Sage
Homme,” Pound congratulated his friend for creating the poem but took
his due credit for helping with the delivery. Pound’s poem begins:
These are the poems of Eliot
By the Uranian Muse begot;
A Man their Mother was,
A Muse their Sire.
How did the printed Infancies result
From Nuptials thus doubly difficult?
If you must needs enquire
Know diligent Reader
That on each Occasion
Ezra performed the Caesarean Operation.
For a delayed response, see Eliot, Ezra Pound (Poetry, Sept. 1946):
I have sometimes tried to perform the same sort of maieutic task; and I
know that one of the temptations against which I have to be on guard,
is trying to rewrite somebody's poem in the way I should have written
it myself if I had wanted to write that poem. Pound never did that: he
tried first to understand what one was attempting to do, and then tried
to help one do it in one's own way.
T. S. Eliot gets the top billing for The Waste Land, but the first of his
endnotes immediately credits both Jessie Weston and James Frazer.
Eliot (1925):
Not only the title, but the plan and a good deal of the incidental
symbolism of the poem were suggested by Miss Jessie L. Weston’s
book on the Grail legend: From Ritual to Romance (Cambridge).
Indeed, so deeply am I indebted, Miss Weston’s book will elucidate
the difficulties of the poem much better than my notes can do; and I
recommend it (apart from the great interest of the book itself) to any
who think such elucidation of the poem worth the trouble. To another
work of anthropology I am indebted in general, one which has
influenced our generation profoundly; I mean The Golden Bough; I
have used especially the two volumes Adonis, Attis, Osiris. Anyone
who is acquainted with these works will immediately recognize in the
poem certain references to vegetation ceremonies.
Eliot’s opening note refers to ANTHROPOLOGY, the study of humanity
across cultures and time and a discipline that was reaching a new level
of popular appeal in the early 1920s, thanks in part to the works of
Weston and James Frazer (see below, and see also Eliot’s later
reference to anthropology at his endnote for TWL 218).
See Jessie L. Weston, The Quest of the Holy Grail (1913), offering
this summary of THE GRAIL LEGEND:
In Arthurian legend, a Fisher King (the fish being an ancient symbol of life)
has been maimed or killed, and his country has therefore become a dry
Waste Land; he can only be regenerated and his land restored to fertility
by a knight (Parsifal) who perseveres through various ordeals to the
Perilous Chapel and learns the answers to certain ritual questions about
the Grail.
Weston concluded in From Ritual to Romance 2 (1920) that
the woes of the land are directly dependent upon the sickness, or maiming,
of the King, and in no wise caused by the failure of the Quester.
See the Grail allusions at TWL 31-35, 201, 266-306, 386-390 and 424-426.
See also James Frazer, The Golden Bough, A Study in Magic and
Religion, 3d Ed (1914). Frazer’s work looks at ancient fertility cults and the
traditions of ritual sacrifice that have influenced our modern culture.
Volumes V & VI of that edition present a two part study of Adonis, Attis and
Osiris, respectively Greek, Phrygian and Egyptian gods of vegetation who
are said to live and die annually.
The themes of REVEGETATION, RENEWAL AND THE EFFECTS OF
SPRING will be revisited at TWL 1, 4, 7, 71, 187, 198, 327 and 351 and
at notes 1, 51, 55, 186, 197 and 389.
By citing Frazer’s work, Eliot introduced a multi-leveled allusion to the
literary ESCORTS of Aeneas’s Sybil, Virgil’s Aeneas and Dante’s Virgil.
Frazer prompted this by naming his book and illustrating its cover with an
explicit nod to the “sylvan landscape” of J. M. W. Turner, The Golden
Bough (1834), a painting that was also featured in an 1856 edition of Virgil,
Aeneid (19 BC; publ. H. Graves & Co). For the painting’s story, see
Aeneid 6 (tr. John Dryden 1697). Aeneas, in search of a new home
after leaving his destroyed city of Troy, encounters the Sybil at Cumae.
The Sybil agrees to act as his escort into hell, where he hopes to find the
ghost of his father, but to enter, Aeneas first must give Proserpina, Queen of
the Underworld, the bough of a golden tree that replenishes itself as
branches are taken from it.
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from T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land, with annotations (and other explanations)
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